Draft ISO standard - comments and feedback requested

I'd appreciate and comments or feedback on
https://www.rd-alliance.org/system/files/documents/InformationPreparatio...
nsureLongTermUse-20170420.docx
It is relevant to the ADMP IG because it is tries to describe the pieces of
information which, based on the concepts of OAIS, are needed for long-term
re-use of information.
Besides OAIS concepts it brings in ideas and approaches from the Project
Management Body of Knowledge (PMBOK) and the Data Management Body of
Knowledge (DMBOK).
..David